slug line

Trent wrote the slug line I have under the banner for what was originally going to be the graphic novel's "official page", before I started this blog. The page went offline, and I couldn't remember the exact wording of the slugline, but I got close. I just found from a cached version of that page, the original slugline read: "Twelve student prodigies. One national science fair. No chance of survival." I realize they're so similar as to be a moot point, but I'm kinda neurotic like that, so I just thought I'd pose the question to my non-existant audience and ask which wording you prefer?