Lookin' good! I would point out, however, that the word bubble placement on panel 3 is a tad awkward, and caused me a seconds confusion. I kept reading the "thanks" bubble before the one that prompted such a response.
thanks, I fixed it... I also re-edited the art for that panel so Whitney doesn't look like a giant compared to Stewart.
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Lookin' good!
I would point out, however, that the word bubble placement on panel 3 is a tad awkward, and caused me a seconds confusion. I kept reading the "thanks" bubble before the one that prompted such a response.
thanks, I fixed it... I also re-edited the art for that panel so Whitney doesn't look like a giant compared to Stewart.
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